From 25dab41a412e0eaa3f039e6118a14b28de1d3c2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: tux <tux@birdeck.com>
Date: Sun, 15 Sep 2024 07:45:44 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] readme rewrite

---
 README.md | 34 ++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 94a4109..e0c0aee 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -23,23 +23,21 @@ sudo dnf -y install gcc g++ make m4 bison byacc patch texinfo
 bash version-check.sh
 ```
 
-edit **vars.sh** and change the following options to suit the desired needs:
+edit **vars.sh** and change the options to suit the desired needs:
 
-- JOBS: parallel threads used for compiling packages
+- JOBS: parallel CPU threads used for compiling packages
+- NETWORKINTERFACE: the name of the network interface which will be configured
+  with dhcp
+- HOSTNAME: the hostname used for the network configuration
+- DOMAIN: the domain name for the network configuration
+- KEYMAP: the keyboard layout
+- LOCALE: the system locale
+- TELNETD: if the telnet server service should to be installed
 - PAPERSIZE: the default paper size used by the groff package
-- NETWORKINTERFACE: the name of the hosts network interface which will be
-  configured with dhcp
-- HOSTNAME: the hostname of the system which will be used for the network
-  configuration
-- DOMAIN: the domain name which will be used for the network configuration
-- KEYMAP: the keboard layout which will be set
-- LOCALE: the system locale which will be set
-- TELNETD: if the telnet server service is desired to be installed;
-  if not, set this option to anything but TRUE
-- MAKECHECK: if in addition to the build and install of all packages the checks
-  should be run too, set this to TRUE
+- MAKECHECK: to run the checks for each package in addition to the build and
+  install process
 
-proceed with the LFS chapters:
+start with the LFS chapters:
 
 - 2.4. Creating a New Partition
 - 2.5. Creating a File System on the Partition
@@ -50,21 +48,21 @@ proceed with the LFS chapters:
 - 4.3. Adding the LFS User
 - 4.4. Setting Up the Environment
 
-copy the scripts into /mnt/lfs/sources
+copy the scripts to /mnt/lfs/sources
 
 - as the lfs user from within the sources directory run **chap5-6.sh**
 
 - when prompted logout the lfs user and as the root user from within the sources
 directory run **chroot.sh**
 
-- when prompted from within the sources directory from within the chroot
-environment run **chap7p1.sh**
+- when prompted run **chap7p1.sh** from within the sources directory in the chroot
+environment
 
 - when prompted run **chap7p2.sh**, **chap8p1.sh** and **chap8p2.sh**
 
 - optionally run **bash-setup.sh** for a base configuration of the bash shell
 
-when prompted continue with the LFS chapters:
+continue with the LFS chapters:
 
 - 10.2. Creating the /etc/fstab File
 - 10.3. Linux-6.1.11