Rewrote some changelog entries

CHANGELOG

@@ -29,24 +29,24 @@ release.
 ------------
 The biggest change in this release is the optimization of several functions. It
 allows for better detection, and dealing with the quirks, of every single
-operating system. Some functions were fortified to better handle unexcepted
-results, like missing a particular binary, or not receiving a hostname.
+operating system. Some functions were fortified to handle unexcepted results
+better, like missing a particular binary, or not returning the hostname.
 
-This release enables also tests to be shorter, by adding new functions. Some
+This release also enables tests to be shorter, by adding new functions. Some
 functions were renamed or slightly changed, to provide more value to the tooling.
 Another big change in this release is a wide set of optimizations and quality
 testing. Outdated pieces were removed, or rewritten, to support features seen in
 newer distributions.
 
-On the level of compliance adjustments have been made to start supporting more
+In the area of compliance, adjustments have been made to start supporting more
 in-depth testing for this. Ideal for companies who have a particular compliance
-need, or want to better enforce the system hardening levels of their systems.
+need, or want to test and enforce the system hardening levels of their systems.
 
 Last but not least, many small changes make this software easier to use. On
 our website we added new guides to provide help and support.
 
-We like to specifically thank Kamil Boratyński, Steve Bosek, and Eric Light.
-Their contributions helped us greatly shaping this release.
+We like to thank our contributors, in particular Kamil Boratyński, Steve Bosek,
+and Eric Light. Their contributions helped us greatly shaping this release.
 
 
 Below are the changes per category:
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Test for IPFW firewall on FreeBSD has been improved: status of pflogd will no
 longer be displayed, when pf is not available.
 
 New test FIRE-4532 introduced for detection of the Mac OS X application firewall.
-Also the status of application firewalls is audited now.
+Also, the status of application firewalls is audited now.
 
 FIRE-4508 is another new test, which tests chains of iptables and their default
 policy (ACCEPT or DROP). This release also supports the upcoming nftables
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ interface names from most operating systems.
 
 * Operating systems
 -------------------
-Improved support for Debian 8 systems. Detection for VMware release has been
+Improved support for Debian 8 systems. Detection of VMware release has been
 added. Boot loader exception is not longer displayed when only a subset of tests
 is performed. FreeBSD systems can now use service command to gather information
 about enabled services.
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ SystemV init is now detected.
 
 * Software and Packages
 -----------------------
-Now informationed will be logged when vulnerable software packages were found.
+Now information will be logged when vulnerable software packages were found.
 Support for DNF (Dandified YUM) for Fedora systems has been added. This is done
 in several tests: PKGS-7350 (installed packages), PKGS-7352 (security notices),
 PKGS-7354 (integrity tests).
@@ -250,14 +250,14 @@ permissions for Docker files, like the socket file [CONT-8108].
 - Plugins execution is improved, with improved logged and counting of active
   plugins.
 - Data uploads: provide help when self-signed certificates are used.
-- Improved output for tests which before showed results as a warning, while
-  actually are just suggestions.
+- Improved output for tests which before showed results as a warning, instead of
+  just as a suggestion.
 - Lynis now uses different exit codes, depending on errors or finding warnings.
   This helps with automation and any custom scripting you want to apply.
 - Preparations to allow compressing the Lynis report file and enhance uploads.
 - Added --config option to show what settings file or profile is used.
 - Tool tips are displayed, to make Lynis even easier to use.
-- Show a warning if the release is older than 4 months.
+- Show a warning if the release is older than four months.
 - PID file has additional checks, including cleanups.