2006-11-24 Manuel Arostegui <marostegui@artica.es>

* en/pandora_chapter1.xml,pandora_chapter2.xml,pandora_chapter3.xml,
          pandora_chapter4.xml,pandora_chapter5.xml,pandora_chapter6.xml,
          pandora_chapter8.xml,pandora_chapter9.xml,pandora_advanced.xml,
          pandora_userguide.xml,pandora_migration.xml,pandora_introduction.xml
          pandora.xml: Text corrections.



git-svn-id: https://svn.code.sf.net/p/pandora/code/trunk@280 c3f86ba8-e40f-0410-aaad-9ba5e7f4b01f

pandora_doc/ChangeLog

@@ -1,3 +1,11 @@
+2006-11-24  Manuel Arostegui <marostegui@artica.es>
+
+	* en/pandora_chapter1.xml,pandora_chapter2.xml,pandora_chapter3.xml,
+	  pandora_chapter4.xml,pandora_chapter5.xml,pandora_chapter6.xml,
+	  pandora_chapter8.xml,pandora_chapter9.xml,pandora_advanced.xml,
+	  pandora_userguide.xml,pandora_migration.xml,pandora_introduction.xml
+	  pandora.xml: Text corrections.
+
 2006-11-21  Esteban Sanchez  <estebans@artica.es>
 
 	* en/pandora_install.xml: Changed module_proc explanation and example,

pandora_doc/en/pandora.xml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8" standalone="no" ?>
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook V4.4//EN"
-	  "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
+	  "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
 <!ENTITY pandora_version "v1.2">
 <!ENTITY pandora "<emphasis>Pandora</emphasis>">
 <!ENTITY include_pandora_introduction SYSTEM "pandora_introduction.xml">
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@
     <copyright>
       <year>2006</year>
       <holder>
-	<EFBFBD>tica Soluciones Tecnol<6F>icas S.L, Sancho Lerena, Esteban
+	Artica Soluciones Tecnologicas S.L, Sancho Lerena, Esteban
-	S<>chez, David Villanueva and others.
+	S<>chez, David Villanueva, Raul Mateos, Manuel Arostegui  and others.
       </holder>
     </copyright>
     <date>19/11/2006</date>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_advanced.xml

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  <emphasis>Multiple Pandora Data Servers for HA
 	  </emphasis>. This is the more complex scenario, because you
-	  dont need to know nothing special about Pandora Server
+	  don't need to know anything special about Pandora Server
 	  setup, and you need to use of another tool to implement
 	  Network HA, like VRRP or Keepalive. For Pandora Data server
 	  you need to setup two identical machines, with the same
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 	  point one of them. If one fails, VRRP or Keepalive "promote"
 	  the other server up, and Pandora Agents, will connect it for
 	  the next data packets. There is no need to change anything
-	  in each of Pandora Data server, only need to be sure that
+	  in each of Pandora Data server, only need ensure that
 	  Pandora Server name is the same on both machines (in pandora
 	  server setup, not in the system hostname).
 	</para>
@@ -47,10 +47,10 @@
 	  </emphasis>. This is more easy. You need to setup multiple
 	  network servers in several machines across your network (or
 	  all of them in the same segment), and assign modules to the
-	  same server. If this servers fails, and there ara other
+	  same server. If this servers fails, and there are other
 	  Network Servers active, marked as "primary" server,
 	  automatically, the first network server available marked as
-	  "Primary" launch the network module query. If you have many
+	  "Primary" will launch the network module query. If you have many
 	  servers marked as "primary", any of them could launch query.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 	  balancing.  </emphasis>. You need to setup multiple network
 	  servers in several machines across your network (or all of
 	  them in the same segment), and assign agent/modules to
-	  different servers, balancing yourself load between all
+	  different servers, balancing load between all
 	  servers available.	  
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -84,29 +84,29 @@
   <sect1><title>Pandora Database design (and redesign from 1.1)</title>
   <para>
     First Pandora versions, from 0.83 until 1.1 was based on a simple
-    idea: ona data, one database insertion. This was very easy to
+    idea: one data, one database insertion. This was very easy to
-    develop and allow to program easily searches, insertions and other
+    develop and allowed to program easily searches, insertions and other
     operations.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This had many advantages and a great problem: the
+    This had many advantages and a big problem: the
     scalability. This system has a limit defined in maximum number of
     modules that could support in a "easy" way, from that number of
     modules the management was too slow.
   </para>
   <para>
-    Solutions based on MySQL cluster was difficult and comes with some
+    Solutions based on MySQL cluster was difficult and cames with some
     problems and they did not offer either a solution in the long
     term.
   </para>
   <para>
     Data compression based on interpolation and data purge, makes a
-    smaller database, but this was not enought. Production systems has
+    smaller database, but this was not enough. Production systems has
     a limit based on 100 agents, with about ten modules each one. This
-    was not a high limit for huge environments.
+    was not a high limit for large environments.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This problem was very important for Pandora future, so we are
+    This problem was very important for Pandora future, so we 
     changed the way Pandora store its data. New data management system
     store only "new" data. If a duplicate value enter the system, it
     won't be stored in database. It's very useful to keep database
@@ -129,11 +129,11 @@
     a graphical representation, for module graph there will be no
     changes. You will have a graph with a perfect horizontal
     line. Pandora, if doesn't receive new values, thinks that there 
-	are no new values, and everything seems to be equal that in the last
+    are no new values, and everything seems to be as in the last
     notification.
   </para>
   <para>
-    This graph, for example, show changes for each data, received each
+    This graph, for example, shows changes for each data, received every
     180 seconds.
 
     <graphic fileref="images/module_graph_full.jpg" scale="60" align="center"/>
@@ -150,10 +150,9 @@
     and it's receiving data. This is an example of an agent connecting
     regulary to server:
     <graphic fileref="images/access_graph_full.jpg" scale="65" align="center"/>
-    If you have low leaks in this graph, you could have experiencing
+    If you have low leaks in this graph, you may have some problems or slow 
-    some problems or slow connections in Pandora Agent connectivity
+    connections in Pandora Agent connectivity with Pandora Server. This graph 
-    with Pandora Server. This graph with previous example could have
+    with previous example could have an aspect similar to this:
-    an aspect similar to this:
     <graphic fileref="images/access_graph_peak.jpg" scale="65" align="center"/>
   </para>  
   </sect1>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter1.xml

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     <para>
       Pandora can be implemented over any operating system, with specific
       agents for each platform. Pandora can also monitor any TCP/IP
-      hardware system, such as load balancers, routers, switches, printers
+      hardware system, as load balancers, routers, switches, printers
       and so on.
     </para>
     <graphic fileref="images/esquema.png" valign="bottom" align="center"/>
@@ -28,17 +28,17 @@
       <emphasis>- Web Console:</emphasis> Pandora's user
       interface. The user controls and operates the system with
       it. Several Web consoles can be implemented in a single system.
-      The Web console is written in PHP, and rests on a database and a
+      The Web console is written in PHP, and it must be over a database and a
       Web server. It is compatible with any platforms - GNU/Linux,
-      Solaris, Win2000, AIX, etc. However, the official supported
+      Solaris, Win2000, AIX, etc. Although, the official supported
       platform is GNU/Linux.
     </para>
     
     <para>
       The console permits the user to control the status of the
       agents, view statistical information, generate graphs and data
-      tables, keep a system incident control, as well as to generate
+      tables, keep a system incident control, moreover, it will be able
-      reports and change the alerts, agents, and user profile
+      to generate reports and change the alerts, agents, and user profile
       settings.
     </para>
 

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter2.xml

@@ -25,14 +25,14 @@
     elements in common among various users. Each user could be in one
     or more groups at any one time. Each group has user profiles which
     are defined and attached to it. A profile is a list of things a
-    user can do, such as view incidents, manage database or other.
+    user can do, such as view incidents, manage database or other tasks.
   </para>
   
   <sect1 id="sec2.1">
     <title>Profile manager</title>
     <para>
       Pandora's profile manager is used to assign specific profiles to
-      each user. A hierarchy of users is so created, structured by the
+      each user. A hierarchy of users is created, structured by the
       user's profile within the company. With this system different
       security levels can be implemented: read-only users, agent group
       coordinators or system administrators.
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
     <title>Adding a user</title>
     
     <para>
-      A user is added clicking on "Manage Users" &gt; "Create user"
+      An user is added clicking on "Manage Users" &gt; "Create user"
       in the Administration Menu
     </para>
     
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
     <title>Deleting a user</title>
     
     <para>
-      A user is deleted by clicking on the delete icon <inlinegraphic
+      An user is deleted by clicking on the delete icon <inlinegraphic
       fileref="images/cancel.png"/> on the right hand side
       of the user. The list of users is accessed through the
       "Manage Users" option in the Administration menu. 
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
   <sect1 id="sec2.4">
     <title>Statistics</title>
     <para>
-      The user activity statistics show a graph with the
+      The user activity statistics shows a graph with the
       activity of the user, being the number of events the audit
       has generated for each user. The number of events of a
       user usually reflects the user's activity.
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
     <title>Messages to users</title>
     <para>
       In pandora 1.2 the possibility of send messages to other 
-      users has been added.To create a new message to other user,
+      users has been added.To create a new message to another user,
       go to "Messages"section in the Operation menu. You can also 
       read the received messages, but the sent messages are not stored.
     </para>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter3.xml

@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
     The agents collect information. There are agents based on a software 
     agent and installed in the System to monitor, and network agents - a 
     non-physical agent, without need of installing any software, that 
-    execute network tasks in Pandora Network servers and shows 
+    executes network tasks in Pandora Network servers and shows 
     information on console.
   </para>
   <para>
     For agents who need to install software into remote systems,
     public key of the machine to be monitored needs to be copied into
-    Pandora Data server to be able to collect data, as it is specified
+    Pandora Data server in order to be able to collect data, as it is specified
     in detail in Pandora Install documentation.
   </para>
   <para>
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
 
     <para>
 	 There are several default groups defined in Pandora. You also can
-     create your own (please use given icons or edit and add your own icons).
+     create your own group (please use given icons or edit and add your own icons).
      You can also modify default ones.
 	 </para>
 
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  <emphasis>Module definition:</emphasis> There are two modes
+	  <emphasis>Module definition:</emphasis> There are two state
 	  for a module:
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  <emphasis>Learning mode:</emphasis> All the modules sent
 	  by the agent are accepted. If modules are not defined, they
-	  are automatically defined by the system. It is recommended
+	  will be automatically defined by the system. It is recommended
 	  to activate the agents in this mode and change it once the
 	  user is familiar with Pandora FMS.
 	</para>
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@
 	value. The Alert can consist of sending an e-mail or SMS to
 	the administrator, sending a SNMP trap, write the incident
 	into the system syslog or Pandora log file, etc. Basically,
-	it's anything that can be triggered by a script configured 
+	anything that can be triggered by a script configured 
 	in the Operating System where Pandora Servers run.
       </para>
       <sect3 id="sec3.2.2.1">
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  The next step after an agent has been added, its 
 	  modules have been configurated and the alerts have been 
-	  defined, is to assign those alerts to the agent.
+	  defined, is assign those alerts to the agent.
 	</para>
 	
 	<para>
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@
       <para>It might happen that the user finds that modules and alerts
       configured for an agent would be repeated in a new agent.
       </para>
-      <para>In order to simplify the administrator's job Pandora offers
+      <para>In order to simplify the administrator's work Pandora offers
       the option of copying modules and alerts defined in an agent to 
       be assigned to another.
       </para>
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@
 	<graphic scale='70' fileref="images/image017.png" 
 		 valign="bottom" align="center"/>
 	<para>
-	 In this list the module information is shown in the following 
+	 In this list the module information is showed in the following 
 	 columns:
 	</para>
 	
@@ -916,8 +916,8 @@
 	</para>
 	
 	<para>
-	 <emphasis>Timestamp:</emphasis> This is the hour of the last 
+	 <emphasis>Timestamp:</emphasis> This is the hour when last 
-	 contact.
+	 contact was made.
 	</para>
       </sect3>
       <sect3 id="sec3.3.2.3">
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@
   <sect1 id="sec3.4">
     <title>SNMP Console</title>
     <para>
-      Almost all device can send SNMP traps when have any problem as
+      Majority of devices can send SNMP traps when have any problem as
       reboot, lost interface, the temperature is very high, CPU crash,
       etc. With Traps is possible to know the problem when it happens.
     </para>
@@ -1140,7 +1140,7 @@
     <sect2 id="sec3.4.1">
       <title>SNMP Alerts</title>
       <para>
-	Just like is possible to generat alert if there is an out of 
+	Just like is possible to generate an alert if there is an out of 
 	range module value. It is possible to generate an alert if an
 	SNMP trap is received with a anorma value. The Alert can consist of 
 	sending and e-mail or SMS to the administrator, sending an SNMP 

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter4.xml

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <para>
     Clicking on "Manage Incidents", in the Operation menu, a list 
     showing all the incidents is displayed, ordered by the date-time they
-    were last updated. Filters can be applied to display only those
+    were updated. Filters can be applied to display only those
     incidents the user is interested on.
   </para>
   
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
   <sect1 id="sec4.3">
     <title>Searching for an incident</title>
     <para>
-      A specific incident can be found amongst the incidents created
+      A specific incident can be found among the incidents created
       in Pandora by either using a filter, as explained in the first
       section of this chapter, or by making a query using the "Manage
       Incidents" &gt; "Searh Incident" tool, in the Operation menu.
@@ -250,8 +250,8 @@
       Any text string included as a sub-string in the incident can be
       searched for using this tool. This search engine looks for the
       string in the Incident title as well as in the text contained by
-      the incident. The search engine will not search neither the
+      the incident. The search engine will not search either the
-      Comments added to the agent nor the attached files. The search
+      Comments added to the agent or the attached files. The search
       can be performed in addition to group, priority or status
       filters.
     </para>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter5.xml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  The events appear ordered chronologically as they enter the
 	  system, and can be viewed by clicking the "View Events"
-	  option in the Operation menu.  The newer events are placed
+	  option in the Operation menu.  The newest events are placed
 	  at the top of the table.
 	</para>
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 	  <title>Statistics</title>
 	  
 	  <para>
-	    Three different kinds of graphical statistic
+	    Three different sort of graphical statistic
 	    representation can be choosen from the "View
 	    Events" &gt; "Statistics" option in the Operation menu:
 	  </para>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_chapter8.xml

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
 	For example, in a module registering the number of processes,
 	if we are only interested in values between 0 and 100, any values 
 	above that number will be usually produced by errors, noise 
-	or abnormal	circumstances. If we set to range between 0 and 100 
+	or abnormal circumstances. If we set to range between 0 and 100 
 	all those values below and above - such as -1, 100 or 100000 - 
 	will be permanently deleted from the database.
       </para>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_introduction.xml

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
       servers, etc. - all integrated into an open and distributed
       architecture.  Pandora can be implemented over any operating
       system, with specific agents for each platform. Pandora can also
-      monitor any TCP/IP hardware system, such as load balancers,
+      monitor any TCP/IP hardware system, as load balancers,
       routers, switches, printers, etc.
       <graphic fileref="images/esquema.png" scale="50" align="center"/>
       Pandora architecture is formed of four main components:
@@ -39,16 +39,16 @@
 	  <emphasis>Web Console</emphasis>: Pandora's user
 	  interface. The user controls and operates the system with
 	  it. Several Web consoles can be implemented in a single
-	  system. The Web console is written in PHP, and rests on a
+	  system. The Web console is written in PHP, and it is over a
 	  database and a Web server. It is compatible with any
-	  platform - GNU/Linux, Solaris, Win2000, AIX, etc. However,
+	  platform - GNU/Linux, Solaris, Win2000, AIX, etc.T
-	  the official supported platform is GNU/Linux.
+	  official supported platform is GNU/Linux, though
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	  The console permits the user to control the status of the
 	  agents, view statistical information, generate graphs and
-	  data tables, keep a system incident control, as well as to
+	  data tables, keep a system incident control,moreover it is able 
-	  generate reports and change the alerts, agents, and user
+	  to generate reports and change the alerts, agents, and user
 	  profile settings.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
     At present, with Pandora any process or system that through a
     command returns a value can be monitored, as well as any value in
     any Operating System log file or similar. Some examples of already
-    existing implementations can be the following ones:
+    existing implementations below:
     <programlisting>      
       Number of connections (sessions) of Checkpoint FW-1
       Number of NAT sessions of Checkpoint FW-1
@@ -199,11 +199,11 @@
     The process of transferring the data file from the agent to the
     server is made regularly at a defined time interval in the agent
     configuration file, pandora_agent.conf. It's possible to modify
-    that parameter to not fill the database with non-relevant
+    that parameter in order to do not fill the database with non-relevant
-    information, not to load the network or to not affect the system
+    information, either load the network or affect the system
     performance. The default interval is 300 (seconds), which is
     equivalent to five minutes. Minor values of 100 (seconds) are not
-    recommended since host performance can be affected, besides
+    recommended since host performance could be affected, besides
     loading excessively Database and the Operating System of Pandora
     Server. Pandora is not a real time system; it's an applications
     and systems general monitoring system in environments that are not
@@ -263,8 +263,7 @@
     Pandora. This file has the information gathered by the Agent. Its
     easy structure allows that any user could create its own
     developments to be processed in Pandora, or use the included ones.
-    An example of the information included into the data file is the
+    An example of the information included into the data file below:
-    following one:
   <screen>
     <![CDATA[
     <agent data os_name="SunOS" os_version="5.8" timestamp="300"
@@ -331,7 +330,7 @@
 	  For example, if you create a module to make a ping check to
 	  192.168.1.1 and assign this agent/module to a server in a
 	  192.168.2.0/24 network without access to 192.168.1.0/24
-	  module always report DOWN. 
+	  module will always report DOWN. 
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -349,27 +348,27 @@
   </para>
   <para>
     Data are extracted from the data file, identifying origin, type
-    and category. One classified, the data are inserted into the
+    and category. Once it's classified, the data are inserted into the
     Database by the same Perl script.
   </para>
   <para>
     Pandora Server can work in High Availability and/or Load
     Balancing. In a very big architecture, several Pandora Servers can
-    be arranged simultaneously to be able to manage big volumes of
+    be arranged simultaneously in order to be able to manage big volumes of
     information distributed by geographical or functional zones.
   </para>
   <para>
     Pandora Server is always running (as a daemon) and permanently
     verifies if some element causes to fire an alarm. If so, it
     executes the action defined in the alarm, as to send a SMS, an
-    email, to activate the execution of a SCRIPT or to send an HTTP
+    email, even activates the execution of a SCRIPT or to send an HTTP
     form.
   </para>
   <para>
     We could have several simultaneous servers, one of them is the
-    Main Server or "Master Server " and the rest servers are "Slave
+    Main Server or "Master Server " and the rest of servers are "Slave
     Servers". The Master Server is the only one that verifies the
-    alarms if any agent goes down. The server who receives the data
+    alarms if any agent goes down. The server which receives the data
     file from the agent always fires the rest of alarms, defined in
     the agents' modules. This is also important if this server changes
     (due to configurations of high availability, load balancing or
@@ -379,20 +378,20 @@
   
   <sect2><title>Pandora console</title>
   <para>
-    The Web Console it's a web application that allows to see
+    The Web Console is a web application that allows to see
-    graphical reports, state of every agent, and to access to the
+    graphical reports, state of every agent, also to access to the
     information sent by the agent, to see every monitored parameter
     and to see its evolution throughout the time, to form the
     different nodes, groups and users of the system. It is the part
-    that interacts with the final user, and that allows you to
+    that interacts with the final user, and that will allows you to
     administer the system.
   </para>
   <para>
     The Web Console is written in PHP and no plug-in, Flash, Java or
     ActiveX is needed to access the console, only a browser that
-    supports HTML and CSS (IE5+ o Mozilla 4+). Pandora Web Console can
+    supports HTML and CSS (IE5+ or Mozilla 4+). Pandora Web Console can
-    run in several servers, the only thing you need is to access
+    run in several servers, the only thing you need is to be allow to
-    Pandora Database, where Pandora stores all the information.
+    access Pandora Database, where Pandora stores all the information.
   </para>
   </sect2>
   
@@ -400,7 +399,7 @@
   <para>
     Pandora uses a SQL Database to store all the information. Pandora
     maintains an asynchronous database with all the received data,
-    making a temporary cohesion of everything what it receives and
+    making a temporary cohesion of everything  it is receives and
     normalizing all the information from the different sources. Every
     Agent data module generates an entry of information for every data
     bundle, which implies that a real production system can have of
@@ -408,33 +407,31 @@
   </para>
   <para>
     This information is managed automatically from Pandora, carrying
-    out a periodic and automatic maintenance of the database. This
+    out a periodic and automatic maintenance of the database. This means
-    allows that Pandora should need neither any type of administration
+    that there is no operator either manager required to run tasks as database
-    of database nor process attended by an operator or manager. This
+    administration ones. This is possible thanks to a periodic purge of the past 
-    is made by a periodic purge of the past information over a date
+    information over a date (by default 90 days), as well as a data 
-    (by default 90 days), as well as a data compaction of the data
+    which is older, by default, 30 days.
-    that have more than, by default, 30 days.
   </para>
 
   <sect3><title>Compacting data</title>
   <para>
-    Data stored by Pandora are useful to see evolutions regard through
+    Data stored by Pandora are useful to see evolutions through
-    the time, to make statistics, to generate reports and to do
+    the time, in order to: make statistics, generate reports and to do
-    capacity planning, as well as other tasks of statistical
+    capacity planning, as well as other statisticals tasks. 
-    nature. For it, it isn't necessary to have all the data, but it's
+    To do that it isn't necessary to have all the data, but it's
     enough to have a representative sample, of smaller resolution,
     enough to carry out the task that is needed.
   </para>
   <para>
     With that philosophy the compaction system has been
-    constructed. If we have a sample of 9.000 elements, distributed
+    constructed. For instance, If we have a sample of 9.000 elements, 
-    during 90 days, for example, Pandora is going to take the data of
+    distributed during 90 days, Pandora will take the data of
-    last month, which would be 3.000 elements and it's going them to
+    last month, which would be 3.000 elements and will compress it in 300. 
-    compress them in 300. In the graphs they will practically be seen
+    In the graphs they will practically be equal, and  it will be usfel for the reports, statistics
-    equal, which it will serve us for the reports, statistics and
+    and other tasks. This is made thanks to a interpolation in temporary
-    other tasks. This is made by means of interpolation in temporary
+    strips, in a totally automatic and periodic way, there is not user
-    strips, in a totally automatic and periodic way, without the user
+    or the administrator needed to do this.
-    or the administrator must himself or herself worry about it.
   </para>
   </sect3>
   </sect2>
@@ -442,12 +439,12 @@
 <sect1>
   <title>Pandora 1.2 new features</title>
   <para>
-    <emphasis>Alert system</emphasis>. Now its possible to define a
+    <emphasis>Alert system</emphasis>. Now it is possible to define a
     "minimun" and "maximum" limit to fire an alert, just to delete
     "noisy" data that fires false positives.
   </para>
   <para>
-    <emphasis>Network Subsystem</emphasis>. Now its possible to
+    <emphasis>Network Subsystem</emphasis>. Now it is possible to
     monitor and analyze data using remote network tools, without using
     agents, from the new Pandora Network Server component. All
     management are made from Pandora Console, and now you will be able
@@ -499,7 +496,7 @@
     Pandora is a project initiated and mainly developed by Sancho
     Lerena, at present other people is working on it: Raul Mateos,
     David Villanueva, Esteban Sanchez, Jose Navarro and Jonathan
-    Barajas. We want to give thanks for many other people who help us
+    Barajas. We want to thank many other people who help us
     with translation, graphic design, bugs reporting and interesting
     ideas.
   </para>

pandora_doc/en/pandora_migration.xml

@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
   </sect1>
   <sect1><title>Migration steps </title>
   <para>
-    0. You need to stop Pandora Server before any changes in
+    0. You need to stop Pandora Server before change anything in
-    database. Think that you dont loose any data in the process of
+    database. Think that you don't lose any data in the process of
     migration because agent data will be stored in incoming
     directory. Move this data to the new incoming directory before
     launch the new server, and you process that data without miss

pandora_doc/en/pandora_userguide.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
       <year>2006</year>
       <holder>
 	Artica Soluciones Tecnologicas S.L, Sancho Lerena, Esteban 
-	Sanchez, David Villanueva and others.
+	Sanchez, David Villanueva, Raul Mateos, Manuel Arostegui and others.
       </holder>
     </copyright>
     <date>19/11/2006</date>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
     <revhistory>
 	    <revision>
 	<revnumber>1.2</revnumber>
-	<date>21 November 2006</date>
+	<date>24 November 2006</date>
 	<revremark>Submitted.</revremark>
       </revision>
        <revision>